Editorial

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diff --git a/about/team.html b/about/team.html
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ <h1 class="block__heading">Roles</h1>
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 		<h1 class="block__heading">Joining the MyBB Team</h1>
 		<div class="block__container">
-			<p>Interested in joining the MyBB Team? It all starts by getting involved with the community such as through development or support.</p>
+			<p>Do you think you would be a good fit? It all starts with getting involved with the Community: active contributors may be invited, or apply for a position.</p>
 			<p class="block__action"><a href="{{ site.baseurl }}/get-involved/" class="button icon icon--after fa-arrow-right">Get Involved</a></p>
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diff --git a/about/team/personnel-management.html b/about/team/personnel-management.html
@@ -48,20 +48,20 @@ <h1 class="block__heading">Joining the MyBB Team</h1>
 3. #### Non-Disclosure Agreement
    A member of the Management Team or the Community Team Leader contacts the candidate over a private channel and provides a blank MyBB Non-Disclosure Agreement to be signed and sent back.
 
-   The signed NDA document is placed in a MyBB Organization Google Drive folder accessible only to aforementioned members.
+   The signed NDA document is placed in storage accessible only to aforementioned members.
 
 4. #### Introducing team members
    1. The recruitment discussion thread in _Personnel_ is deleted.
-   2. A welcome thread (_[welcome]_`Username`) is created in _Personnel_, where the new member can provide details necessary to grant them access to the remaining platforms.
-   3. _MyBB Staff_, _Super Moderator Access_ and specific team group(s) are assigned to the Community account.
+   2. A welcome thread (_Welcome `Username`_) is created in _Personnel_, where the new member can provide details necessary to grant them access to the remaining platforms.
+   3. _MyBB Team_, _Super Moderator Access_ and specific team group(s) are assigned to the Community account.
 
 5. #### Onboarding
    1. A welcome message is sent over a non-public channel:
 
       **Title (if applicable):** `Welcome to the MyBB Team`
 
       ```
-      Hello Username,
+      Hello (...),
 
       Congratulations and welcome to the MyBB Team! Here is some information that might help you get started.
 
@@ -83,10 +83,8 @@ <h1 class="block__heading">Joining the MyBB Team</h1>
       Changing your passwords might be a good idea given the elevation of permissions.
       If you notice anything suspicious, do not hesitate to report it to other MyBB Team members.
 
-      Team-specific tasks are described in: https://mybb.com/about/team/groups/
-
       We have created a thread where you can provide necessary information so that Team members operating our organizations on additional services and platforms can add you there - you can also use it if you have any questions or feedback:
-      https://...
+      (...)
 
       Have a great day,
       MyBB Team Management

diff --git a/get-involved/index.html b/get-involved/index.html
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ <h1 class="block__heading">MyBB Discord Server</h1>
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 		<h1 class="block__heading">Joining the MyBB Team</h1>
 		<div class="block__container">
-			<p>Reach us on the Community Forums to apply to the Team which designs and builds MyBB and manages the MyBB Project. Tell us about your (related) interests, experience, previous contributions to MyBB and/or other open-source software, available time and why you'd like to join.</p>
+			<p>Interested in joining the Team that designs, builds, and manages MyBB? Tell us about your interests, experience, previous contributions to MyBB and/or other open-source software, available time, and why you'd like to join!</p>
 			<p class="block__action"><a href="https://community.mybb.com/forum-135.html" class="button button--secondary">{% include icon.html icon='comment' %}Open Private Inquiries</a></p>
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