From 6d33a67d78163d05275c0590698a5a9942fa1a83 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Evandro Saturnino <60587527+evandrosaturnino@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 26 Mar 2024 22:24:23 -0300 Subject: [PATCH] refactor taco landing page copies MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Co-authored-by: Arjun Hassard Co-authored-by: David Núñez --- src/content/pages/build/taco.md | 26 +++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/content/pages/build/taco.md b/src/content/pages/build/taco.md index 5a009ce..d0d9284 100644 --- a/src/content/pages/build/taco.md +++ b/src/content/pages/build/taco.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ seoTitle: Threshold Taco seoDescription: "TACo (Threshold Access Control) enables end-to-end encrypted data sharing and communication." tacoInfo: title: "TACo: Privacy without trust" - description: "Give your users true sovereignty over their data, today. TACo – the first and only access control layer you aren’t forced to trust." + description: "Give your users true sovereignty over their data, today. TACo is the first and only access control layer you aren’t forced to trust." image: /images/taco-encryption.svg buttons: - label: Start Building @@ -17,41 +17,41 @@ tacoInfo: variant: EXTERNAL_OUTLINE rowReverse: false tacoFeaturesInfo: - title: "The Fully Decentralized End-to-End Encryption" - description: "Empower users to share data with qualifying recipients, and no-one else Encryption via a decentralized cryptosystem." + title: "End-to-End Encryption. End-to-End Decentralized." + description: "Empower users to share data with qualifying recipients, and no-one else. Encryption via a decentralized cryptosystem, from day one." highlighted: ["Decentralized", "Encryption"] tacoFeatures: - title: "Web3 needs TACo" cards: - title: "Decentralized Storage" - description: "TACo is the perfect compliment to persistent storage, finally enabling users to grant future access without having to download & re-encrypt locally." + description: "TACo is the perfect complement to persistent storage, finally enabling users to grant future access without having to download & re-encrypt locally." icon: /images/storage-icon.svg - title: "Web3 Social Networks" - description: "TACo enables many-to-many data sharing, minus a centralized authority that eventually decides to harvest and monetize interpersonal communication." + description: "TACo enables many-to-many data sharing, without a centralized authority that may harvest and monetize interpersonal communication." icon: /images/social-icon.svg - title: "Media content-gating" - description: "Whether it's a stream, a movie or a collectible, TACo enforces decryption rights to media, so owning an NFT has meaning beyond a symbolic receipt." + description: "Whether it's a stream, a movie or a collectible, TACo enforces the decryption rights. 'Owning' an NFT now has meaning beyond a symbolic receipt." icon: /images/media-icon.svg - title: "The Web needs TACo" cards: - title: "Hyper-sensitive data" - description: "From reproductive health data to seed phrase recovery, TACo is leveraged to ensure that high-stakes data sharing doesn’t involve trusting an intermediary." + description: "From reproductive healthcare to password recovery, TACo is used to ensure that high-stakes data sharing doesn’t involve trusting an intermediary." icon: /images/locker-icon.svg - title: "IoT & Connected Vehicles" - description: "TACo is the antidote to the interconnected hardware panopticon, where every waking (and sleeping) moment of our lives is surveilled." + description: "TACo is the antidote to the interconnected hardware panopticon, in which every waking (and sleeping) moment of our lives is surveilled/harvested by data custodians." icon: /images/iot-icon.svg - title: "Activism & Human Rights" - description: "TACo protects those most at risk of intimidation, censorship and reprisal based on a data leaks – whether via a hack, subpoena, or a data vending business model." + description: "TACo protects the most vulnerable in society – those who may suffer intimidation, censorship and violence as a consequence of their data being leaked." icon: /images/activism-icon.svg tacoDiagramsInfo: title: "Integrate a Privacy Layer with Nothing to Hide" - description: "TACo isn't just auditable, it's comprehensible, from high-level schematic to client code." + description: "TACo isn't just auditable, it's comprehensible. From high-level schematic to client code." image: /images/taco-grid.svg background: /images/glowing-background.png tacoDiagrams: - title: "Generating a DKG Cohort" preTitle: "learn" - description: "Independent nodes sampled from the Threshold network form a cohort – who collectively generate a DKG public key." + description: "Independent nodes are sampled from the Threshold Network, forming a cohort that collectively generates a DKG public key." image: /images/first-taco-diagram.svg buttons: - label: "nucypher/ferveo" @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ tacoDiagrams: variant: EXTERNAL_OUTLINE - title: "Encrypting Private Data" preTitle: "learn" - description: "Data owners specify conditions for decryption, embedded with private data and encrypted with the DKG public key." + description: "Data owners specify decryption conditions, embedded alongside the private data. The payload is encrypted with the DKG public key." image: "/images/second-taco-diagram.svg" buttons: - label: "taco-web" @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ tacoDiagrams: variant: EXTERNAL_OUTLINE - title: "Accessing Decrypted Data" preTitle: "learn" - description: "Requesters present state to the cohort, who verify conditions fulfillment before provisioning decryption material." + description: "Data requesters present proof to the cohort, who verify condition fulfillment before provisioning them with decryption material." image: "/images/third-taco-diagram.svg" buttons: - label: "taco-web"